My Narrative

WALT: change a recount into a narrative by changing from 1st to 3rd person

Falls.

“Yessss!!” Shaun whispered to himself, as he was allowed to go for a swim with the boys. Roger, Greg, Jarryd, Jonathan and Shaun were at the Tautoro Falls. Roger did a bomb off the rock at the Tautoro falls. Kapoooooooooof! The water went high as. Shaun jumped out into the cool water from off the rock PIPOOOOOOOF! Shaun’s whippy went huge.

It was Sunday. They had all walked all the way from Kaikohe. All that they could smell was fresh water. All that they could hear was the water dropping into the water at the bottom of the waterfall.

As Shaun again jumped into the water and performed a whippy it had started to rain, then out came Greg. Greg said “I’ll do a backflip aye” so he jumped and performed a backflip bomb into the water.

Then they all decided to do a bomb chain. They stood in a row and waited to go one by one, Shaun first, then Greg, then Jarryd and then Roger. “Far out! That was humongous, eh Roger” said Jonathan.

Then they were all doing their bombs. Kaboom! Shaun and Roger did a bomb at the same time. Greg did a mean as Whippy and it went high as.

“Ghee that was dumb” Greg said to Shaun.

“Bro your all cake I’ll smash you!” Shaun replied angrily.

“Kean!” Greg replied. So then they started having a fight and Shaun punched Greg into the water.

“Bro stop it you idiots!” Jarryd yelled at those boys.  

“Ok then” they replied at the same time.

“Jynx” Hahahahahaha they both smiled and laughed at each other.

At the end of the day they all had fun doing bombs and Shaun can’t wait to go to the falls with his boys again, because it is a  a lot of fun.